The Burgher and the Pauper #3 – starting to get the hang
So, I think this one is much better.
I’m going back now to redo the first parts of the story, in the same style, but see what you think about #3.
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bs’d
YES, this is better and better! I love your visualization of their hiding in the pits, something I could never visualize myself. wanting more!
Thanks for the encouragement, Alizah. Went back to the drawing board after your email to re-do the first parts. #1 going up soon.
bs”d
very welcome!